this is alittle something i was working on today, my buddy vikki put her input in it aswell lol,bless her! Final Breath With a knife in his chest, he drew his last breath, the last power trickling through his fingertips, the cold hard step, his final pillow, his life ebbed away like waves fleeing a deserted beach.

wow! i like it, its short but with no lack of emotion! we are really getting some good poems on here now!! :)

lol why thank you Zurina!

ok, i think its only fair i show you more of my attempts at poetry as i did say i would if more got posted :) WARNING: I've been in a lovey-dovey mood lately don't know why, its scary!! lol :? but here are two more, they dont have titles lol Whisper to me your dreams, your hopes, Confide in me your darkest fears. I will wrap my love around you tight, To keep you warm all through the night Do we dare to love? To open our heart? Only to risk being pulled apart? I pray for hope from the stars above. And wish they send you, on the wings of a dove. ...and..... The words to say are so hard to find, I look down deep, and search my mind, Being un-aware yet can plainly see, You feel exactly the same for me. Uncertainty creeps up behind, I’m left feeling completely blind, To all that could have been, Things that should have been, if I had found those three precious words.

they are so totaly amazing!!! i really really like those! there so romantic! i love them! i like the first one the most but they are both terrific!!!!!! you have to be the best at writting poems around here lol seriously!! i cant wait to here more, im addicted!

lol i prefer the first one too, i think its the last two lines that do it. But i dont think i'm the best, no way!! everyone elses are ace!

yeah i love the last two lines aswell!! yours are so totaly ace aswell!!! they are soo good that i think they could be published in an anthology!!! these last two poemsyou've written are by far my fav ones you've written!

An anthology?!! no way!! lol i had a poem published in a book once, it was sooooo terribly bad i cringe at the very thought! lol

surely if you had it published in a book, it cant be bad!!!!!!

ooh it can be, they were desperate! lol

well judging by your currant poems, the one you had published must have benn damn good!!! i dont care what you say, i think they are all worthy and you rock at writting poems!!! you go girl!!!! (hem hem, a bit over the top there)

:D She's so creative...!!!! I inspire her... *giggles* well I need to claim fame some how.. and we are "close friends in the Guild" .... shes just friends with me for my wine.. once drunk the ideas comes.. theres my claim to her talent :D

its all thanks to you Savara!! :P

huh. I read some of the poems you guys wrote- awesome, but im gonna try a short story... suggestions for it? its gotta be about kyralia right?

Ebony I liked your poem!!! Especially as it reminds me of Sonea stabbing Dannyl and then Dannyls 'hobbling' around!!! lol!! Love that bit!