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In my dreams i see you In my mind your there I wish i could go back to life without a care My world has lost it's meaning My heart has lost it's beat My soul has lost it's feelings My life is incomplete I wish i didn't have to hear your ever-lasting cry I wish i'd never gone to say my last goodbye My world has lost it's meaning My heart has lost it's beat My soul has lost it's feelings My life is incomplete I'll always see you standing just beyong my reach I'll always hear you calling lost in one long screech My world has lost it's meaning My heart has lost it's beat My soul has lost it's feelings My life is incomplete

wow. one of the bestest poems iv actually ever read on this site. wow.

ok so u can write poems, draw, play music, sing. is there anything u cant do????

nope i'm bloody brilliant :P

Great poem Lorkin. Here is yet another poor excuse for poetry; Life is a mystery Lost at the start If you don’t find meaning, Then you may depart. Love is my answer The reason I cry The reason I answer And the reason I’ll die. Love is like magic, It’s a part of your mind Look deep in your heart And see what you might find. You might find beauty You might find emotion You might find a meaning Or a messy sort of commotion But I’ll tell you what I think you’ll find I’ll tell you what you’ll see You’ll see a moving beating love A beating love for me.

i like rhyming poetry

Issle thats actually brilliant. thumbs up to you!!! yay (u should feel privaliged, i dont give a thumbs up to any old person you know)

A single tear runs down my cheek slowly running red. A river of pain yet remains leaving my hopes for dead. Though still I stand, the blood stains my hands. And slaughtered pride falsely resides within my battered mind. You blind me and confine me, from my fading life. I hate you, as I dream of you, I die a tortured death. I'll hate you, for I love you, until I draw my final breath. woooo this is the poem iv been working on for a couple of days now lol yeah it actually does take me that long

WOW Ebs my god WOW i dont no what to say lol and thats hard for somone to dhut me up, as you may no, WOWOWOWOWOWOW 1 word to say really : Meaning (and lots of it)

erm..thanks Heidi but it wernt THAT good. Issle's is better which is why i werent gonna post it, but i did lol coz i like it.

death and destruction :twisted:

It's very good Ebony, your poems have meaning and are extremely well written. It screams "Oi you don't mess with me." Maybe that's just me?

i think those are compliments. YAY u have no idea how many times i scrunched up my paper and almost had a cow. seriously. poetry does not come easily to me!!

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