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Autumn Golden old, And biting cold, White glow of Dawn, Bright leaves all torn, Sun raised high, Clouds; none shy. And Summer's sold, For autumn's Fold. This one I didnt come up with so easily... it might not make much sense :S

hai! why u feel like a reject!! your NOT a reject Sabriel!!!!!

Raindrops and Roses The rain falls and covers all The Earth she mourns its loss. Too soon gone, too much left unknown. In our memory will you always be. Years can go by And the memories can fade But you will still be here Deep within me. Seasons change but it’s still the same I reminisce, and find I can still cry. Spring leaps forward with a bout flowers Beautiful and pure, a rose stands tall. Alone but unafraid it grows and grows But tilts its head and slows passes Away from this world, away from me To join you in heavens embrace. You stepped over deaths threshold And were lost to me forever Weeping for the loss, But knew it had to be In order for you To truly be free. I pray for your life, I pray for our memories. Goodbye for now. The love of my life. it wasn't about Akkarin, but i made it about him with the last line.

Yay! It is so good Zurina! You are an extra-talented poo! 8)

I wrote a poem but it isn't at all good My life changed in a moment, A moment of time. And now I am hunted, For that empty crime. I sit in my room, I stare at the ceiling. And with the power of my mind, I gather that feeling. The feeling of anger, The feeling of pain, I put together these emotions, And try, and try again. That knock at the door, It echoes through my mind. Is it the final test? I wonder what I’ll find. A long broad face, With narrowing eyes. He looks down at me, For I’m his humble prize. I’ll do as he bids, Or face certain death. I’ll bow down before him, And hold a deep breath. What does he want? Only time shall tell. I have the power of the richest. Me, a dirty dwell. He asks if I’m improving, I hang my head in shame. He looks at me intensely, And I know that I’m to blame. As he leaves I release my breath, And sink slowly to my knees. I know that I’m a slave for now, But i willgain his appease.

It definately is good, Issle! And I can't wait for the third part of yours, ebony and Heidi! Zurina, yours is great, too! We're all a talented bunch :D Don't feel like a reject Sabriel! I'm the one who isn't devoted enough over here :( I only have a measly 20 posts. I'm on as much as I can be but I guess I'm more of a reader than a poster :/

*cough cough* I almost choked from shock Are you feelin alright?

Here is another poem, i dont know how it is related to BMT but oh well I used to always wonder, What is true love? Is it something you buy? As pure as the morning dove? Why do people look for love? How can it get through? I used to ponder on at love, And that’s when I met you. You gave my life a meaning, You gave me so much care. Even though I won’t always see you, In my heart your there. So here’s a small reminder, To love not push away. That one true love, deep in your heart, To make you smile one day!

Lol yes I'm feeling fine, Issle. I have another poem too. Dark, I'm afraid. Though it is kind of Sonea's extreme feelings when Akkarin dies in her arms, so dark would probably be more fitting... One Moment It all ends in one moment As I watch my world fall apart Everything crumbles Into the depths of my heart. As you lie still Under the dark sky I fall with you All our hopes were lies. My hands shake As I can't feel your breath You had softly smiled at me As you were taken by death. All time stops When my eyes rest on yours An eternity is over As the rain begins to pour I let go of hope I let go of my fears Realization hits me As I'm blinded by tears And it all ends in one moment As my world falls apart Everything is in ruins In the ruins of my shattered heart. ~Probably the least cheerful poem I've ever written, but in the moment of their lover's death I doubt anyone would have many positive thoughts :S

Wow that is really good. I don't think it is dark, I think it is sad and full of emotion

everyone's poems are very awsum... and I AM a reject >.< I've been butted outta the circle! I dunno what's going on? where did Savara run off to? She's on msn but she's disappeared on here!

You are not a reject, Sabriel, I never know what is going on wherever i go- be it here or in life.

Savara has just come off holiday, but i think you mean that her name had gone on who was on the site. She does that sometimes, goes onto another website i guess ^_^ Fabulous poems. I felt sad all over again when i read yours shadow empress. And Issle, a very interesting concept - love it :D

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