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brilliant Lorkin... gives me something to aspire to :-) ...and at last we are miles away from the subject of "forgetmenots" <sigh> it's been quite a traumatic day :( Gem

thanks..... i think ... i dont really know what it's like to be a bundle - i should try is some time... See, your just as bad as me!! :P

Very pretty. I really enjoyed reading it. You'll write more of course?

i can't take compliments because they'll make be big headded - like my big brother.

im sure they wont Lorkin!! try taking one, repeat after me, "my work so far is fab and i love my poem and entries to the art comp". go.

tell that to josh....

We wilt, We fail. We die, We pale. A few races in life Are lost from the start. A journey upphill, Only to fall. Meant for age and to wither and die. Forgetmenots bloom As I leave you. Autumn is past And winter is here. Life is wilting, We're over-bloomed. Forgetmenot, I ask of you. Remember me, I'll remember you. awesome! as usual :P

Who's josh... *raise eyebrows* giggles Josh is obviously pants and has no taste in art.. or he's blinded by your arts amazingness and then couldn't c it properly... ???

Josh is Lorkins brother. Josh dont get so big headed!!! there, hows that for u Lorkin???

Josh is Lorkins brother. Josh dont get so big headed!!! there, hows that for u Lorkin??? I second that! Lorkin u r very talented... take a bow :D Gem

<another effort fuelled by dark red wine and some (very) dark chocolate (Akkarin & dark chocolate <thinks> yes I definitely can see the link! :wink:)> Gem Spring Blossom Cast upon time Blossoms on the stream Dance on the waters of life Twist through the droplets of a dream You spoke to me of death Your eyes echoed pain Lost love of the past Blossom fell like scarlet rain I walked into your world Unbidden, no words said I looked upon your burden And it filled my heart with dread Cast upon time The blossoms’ dance has ceased I alone drift on Your soul has been released

:cry: love it! so seriously too. It has that sense of loss that can never be replace, which is beautiful!!

Truly impressive. And I really do mean that. I really like the blossom imagery... after all, we all know I'm a softie for flowers... pity my flowerbed is a little odd lately...

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