The Poetry-corner!

The Poetry-corner!
From now on the High Lord will be listening to poetry, particularly gifted poets will be rewarded with something suitable. The poem can be any length, any style, but must relate to Kyralia (if only vaguely). Co-judge will be Lady Zurina. This will be on-going and any person can submit any number of poems, short stories are also welcome, of any length!

sounds interesting. I just might join you in listening in....I wonder if any of the novices would be interested in poetry? unlikely, they're most likely to busy with their studies. Lorlen *who's making an appereance for once* :)

sounds interesting. I just might join you in listening in....I wonder if any of the novices would be interested in poetry? unlikely, they're most likely to busy with their studies. Lorlen *who's making an appereance for once* :) I missed you!!!! I noticed u had disappeared... Plz never leave us again :(

As no one else is ready to start, I will sacrifice my dignity... Remember it is a work in progress! Of Billowing Black The moon is blind, And cannot see. I elude justice, As it has eluded me. I am a creature Of billowing black. My struggle is lonely, But there is no turning back.

it's good but i'd have put "As it eludes me" and "There is no turning back"

Hmm yes, advice taken, I think... "And it eludes me" instead of the "as", a compromise? :) As for the last line, I want it long to bring closure... A sincere thank you for your advice. It really does help. ,

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I have found a problem though, changing it changes the actual time of the statement... before it was "As it has eluded me" being strictly past tense... where as it now is, "And it eludes me." bringing it into the present. The lines are not interchangeable. Now I have to figure out which I want...

I have found a problem though, changing it changes the actual time of the statement... before it was "As it has eluded me" being strictly past tense... where as it now is, "And it eludes me." bringing it into the present. The lines are not interchangeable. Now I have to figure out which I want... oh.....

Ok, heres my bravery test: putting my poem on here!! A Tear. In the Sachakan wastelands my dream began He longed for me, my heart it sang. Whispers and promises, secrets told, Outlawed and hunted: moments of gold. Lost to me, I weep from fear That love of mine, gone in a tear.

Beautiful, I am moved. I like how rythmic it is, and how lyrical it is. Poetry at it's finest!

THEY ARE BOTH AMAZING!!! WELL DONE...!!!! :O Come on more more more more!!!

Beautiful, I am moved. I like how rythmic it is, and how lyrical it is. Poetry at it's finest! Aw thank you. Yours captures Akkarin well. :)

Mine needs searious work.. anyone that could fix it and resend it to me would recieve a *HUG* Lol!!! Please fix :) __________________________________________ TORTURE Discarded robes heaped on the floor No secrets now he shuts the door They reach the climax all problems lost Sense is discarded no thought to the cost A tear is shed in the pouring rain Grey tombstones and white lilies remain Memories of the night before torture her soul...

Its ace Savara! anyways, ive got another poem. Its Avala 'teasing' Fergun. no title either lol Surrender to me your very will, I desire your touch to get my fill, Sh, don’t speak, your mine now, To do with as I will, and how! Your weak and fragile, don’t fight or scream, Look who’s there? This isn’t a dream, Your Guild, oh so precious lay dead on the floor, To be silent, evermore.

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