feelings
sadness anger turned to sadness why did you leave? nothing inside me anymore blackness enclosing my mind what will i do now that you're gone? darkness surrounding my senses why did you leave me alone? gone and left me standing here is it tears or rain on my cheek? will I ever be the same again?

oh me likes, very well done Lady Vinara, good imagery here and rather angsty! ^_^ *claps*

:claps: That's a lovely poem, very sad.

why tank you... =o) but I have to ask this for I read the word several times now - what dows 'angsty' mean?

devotion your eyes so deep your heart so wide so loving the touch of your hand the gentle whisper of your voice telling sweet secrets into my ears oh why can't we be in a place that belongs only to us far away from despair and fear forever together the whole world and more i see in your eyes if only you would be real

Wonderful - very wonderful and so true

thank you so much kas :oops:

wow that is some good poetry. I like some of the rythuming. (to both) and I like how you put one word at the top as if it's not really a title but goes with the poem and the rest goes further in-depth and further describes that feeling.

*blushes* thx lorlyn *huggs*

The second one is so sweet. You are a wonderful poet.

:oops: thx thx thx :oops: it was my first attempt in writing some english ones... never thaught you'd like them so much =o))

We do, and I'm more impressed now that know it was you're first attepmt.

wow both are really good Vinara!! i love the second one though :-D

glad you like them :D here's anotherone: nightfall dusk setting twilight falling clouds still mourning for the sun colours fading world so silent lonely hearts are weeping

awww i like that one too. love the last line of it.