Blitzed!
heres a crapy poem i found in one of my primary school jotters from quite a few years back: Blitz Bombing! Bombs are dropping everywhere Lots of ruble in the air Inside the shelter you can hear Tombs falling, causing fear Zap . . . another one falling near Bombs are dropping everywhere Only, this time i cant hear Mum is calling, out of fear Bellowing orders in our ears Inside my mind i want to cry Never mind im going to die German bombers overhead well that was it. i think it was from the time we where looking at world war 2.

Sounds like. Can't people say nazi instead of german? I always feel a little offended.

sorry, dont mean to offend!

I know, it was more in general.

If so can you suggest another way to end the poem? if so please tell me.

I don't know any way, sorry, I'm not so much into poetry. Anyway, the 4th line must be wrong, I think, it starts with B instead of T.

thank you for noticing that! lol im always bad or too lazy with my spelling and grammer.

You're welcome. I think there was something different wrong than spelling or grammar. *shrugs*

yeah . . . well. Itz a bit strange i work in the library at school lol. And im in the top english class.

Well, Tombs dropping certainly brings interesting and amusing images to mind.

it most certainly does bring up interesting images. but even if tombs sounds a little weird in the poem it goes with the poem. I see it as a symbol of people dieing, death. (not that the bombs weren't already symbols of death :-P) such a sad poem. I agree with Alira. people need to stop saying it was the german's who started the 2nd world war. it was the nazi's and the leader of the time. if I recall hilter killed other germans to. not to get into a histroy lesson but I was always interesting in world war I & II and some other different areas in history.

okay i'll try and come up with an alternative ending.

I'm glad someone agrees with me. The falling tombs would be interesting, indeed.

im sorry everyone i just cant think of another line. ahhhhhh

don't worry about it Rothen. :)